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The 15 Best Editing Tips to Craft Clear Content - CoSchedule
The 15 Best Editing Tips to Craft Clear Content Itââ¬â¢s a little embarrassing to admit, but I never set out to become an editor. I always loved to write (I recently found an anthology of literature I published at age 10), but I didnââ¬â¢t fully understand the weight of an editorââ¬â¢s role until I had already been editing for a few years. You see, everyone has their own editing processes and their own tricks, so I never knew whether my way was the ââ¬Å"rightâ⬠way. In fact, most people use one trick in particular: Let someone else do it. Thatââ¬â¢s because itââ¬â¢s easy to have great ideas. Itââ¬â¢s not so easy to write them down in a way that others can understand them. Itââ¬â¢s not worth putting your ideas down on a page if you canââ¬â¢t edit your own work or canââ¬â¢t get someone to do it for you. And in todayââ¬â¢s content-driven universe, you canââ¬â¢t afford to be both a bad writer and a bad editor. This is whyà the role of the great editor is paramount. Whether you use these tips for yourself or pass them along to your favorite college intern, I encourage you to keep your editing chops in tip-top shape. In todayââ¬â¢s world of more, more, more, itââ¬â¢s not always the longest or most timely content that wins- itââ¬â¢s the best. In todayââ¬â¢s world of more, more, more, itââ¬â¢s not always the longest or most timely content thatGet Your Free Self-Editing ChecklistThe 15 Best Editing Tips to Craft Clear Content1. Put Yourself in Your Audienceââ¬â¢s Shoes First and foremost: Audience, audience, audience. You may not see this as a traditional editing tip, and I get that. But after you write your first draft (which should always be for yourself, by the way), itââ¬â¢s time to read through the entire thing and pretend you are someone else- namely, someone in your audience. That ââ¬Å"someoneâ⬠might be a persona: an avatar of a particular segment of your audience with unique interests and problems. Ask yourself, would that person find this piece valuable? Does it answer a question relevant to their interests? Would they click this headline? Is this writing above or below their experience level? Your answers to these questions will help you tailor future drafts to better serve your audienceââ¬â¢s needs. Recommended Reading: How to Find Your Target Audience and Create the Best Content That Connects 2. Read Your Writing Out Loud No, this isnââ¬â¢t about admiring the sound of your own voice or keeping your pet hamster occupied. Reading your work out loud will draw attention to clunky turns of phrase, misused words, and convoluted sentence structures. Itââ¬â¢s a great way to revisit your work with fresh eyes (or ears) after hours of writing. Reading out loud doesnââ¬â¢t just help your syntax, either. Youââ¬â¢ll more easily detect lapses in your authentic voice- moments when your writing stops sounding like ââ¬Å"you.â⬠You might also discover opportunities to finesse the rhythm and pace of your writing. Grab a glass of water, close that office door, and give this tactic a try. As a bonus, you may even want to consider recording yourself reading aloud so you can listen back and see how you reallyà sound. Don't want to read your own work out loud? Get an app to do it for you. ReadWrite is a helpful Chrome extension that can do just that: 3. Kill Your Darlings Brace yourself: Ten to fifteen percent of what youââ¬â¢ve written likely needs to be cut. If that percentage seems daunting, donââ¬â¢t despair! Taking a hatchet to that first draft will only make your writing leaner, meaner, and more effective. As you trim, look for repetitive sentences, weak transitions, unnecessary anecdotes, and clichà ©s. Cut or revise anything that hikes up your word count without delivering value in return. Yes,à search engines (and many humans) prefer longer and meatier content. But never prioritize quantity over quality when it comes to your words. 4. Quell Your Writer Ego Skeptical of these editing suggestions? Struggling to find anything to trim or change? Your writer ego might be the culprit. Ego should take a backseat when editing. Remember that first tip, where you put yourself in your audienceââ¬â¢s shoes? That shift in perspective helps you serve your reader, rather than yourself. Editing is part of that service. Clinging to your writer ego leads to slimy self-promotion, clouds your ability to see opportunities for improvement, and obstructs your development as a writer. Prioritize what youââ¬â¢re giving your reader, and stronger writing will follow. Prioritize what youââ¬â¢re giving your reader, and stronger writing will follow.5. Make Paragraphs Smaller and Sentences Shorter We tend to pontificate on the intrinsic value of the language we explore through the written word while sipping our steaming cup of tea and baring our souls to the world around us to the sound of the ravenââ¬â¢s caw outside our- Gah. Gross. I can barely make sense of sentences like the one above, much less learn from them. And Iââ¬â¢m not alone- English-speakers find shorter paragraphs and sentences easier to comprehend. The human brain looks for natural breaks in the text and uses those pauses to interpret what itââ¬â¢s just read. Ramble on for too long, and youââ¬â¢re likely to lose your reader. Most of your sentences should fall comfortably inside the 20- to 25-word range. Publishers disagree on the ideal length of a paragraph for web content- some feel two sentences is long enough, while others insist on a minimum of five sentences. Whatever rule you obey, limit yourself to one idea per paragraph. You may need several words to elaborate on an important point or frame an idea in colorful language to emphasize its power. Go nuts! Just be sure to break those ideas into concise, comprehensible chunks. Recommended Reading: How Long Should a Blog Post Be to Get the Most Traffic and Shares? 6. Vary Sentence Length and Structure I may sound like Iââ¬â¢m contradicting the point I made above, but hear me out: Your sentences can vary in length while still being succinct. Cap the majority of your sentences at 20 words, but donââ¬â¢t be afraid to mix it up. Throw in a short, emphatic statement here and there. Step outside that 25-word maximum every so often. These variations create rhythm, control pace, and help hold your readerââ¬â¢s attention to the very last word. Varied sentence lengths create rhythm, control pace, and help hold your reader's attention to the...7. Avoid Adverbs Take it from Stephen King himself: ââ¬Å"The road to hell is paved with adverbs.â⬠ââ¬Å"But,â⬠you say, ââ¬Å"I write content for a martech publication, not fiction! I never use adverbs. When would I use a word like ââ¬Ëangrily,ââ¬â¢ ââ¬Ëplayfully,ââ¬â¢ or ââ¬Ëindubitably?ââ¬â¢Ã¢â¬ Not so fast. Comb your sentences for common adverbs like ââ¬Å"very,â⬠ââ¬Å"totally,â⬠and ââ¬Å"reallyâ⬠- you may find a few have snuck into your writing. And while you might think you need certain adverbs for clarity, look for more specific ways to create emphasis without relying on empty adverbs like ââ¬Å"extremely.â⬠And while you might think you need certain adverbs for clarity, look for more specific ways to...8. Develop an Allergy to Jargon ââ¬Å"Jargonâ⬠includes both industry-specific colloquialisms and vocabulary used by experts to talk precisely about high-level concepts, and itââ¬â¢s essential to understand the difference. To an outsider, any industry-specific terms might sound like gibberish. This kind of jargon can be useful when writing for your peers- provided you match your language to your audienceââ¬â¢s experience level. The other flavor of jargon, however, muddies your writing. Donââ¬â¢t mistake a ââ¬Å"fancyâ⬠word for a precise one. Avoid ââ¬Å"utilizingâ⬠or ââ¬Å"leveragingâ⬠something when you could simply ââ¬Å"useâ⬠it. As you edit, ask yourself, ââ¬Å"Is this language as specific as possible? Is there a simpler word I can use here to communicate the same idea?â⬠If the answer is ââ¬Å"yes,â⬠youââ¬â¢ve got some jargon-slashing to do. Recommended Reading: The Most Complete Content Editing Process to Avoid Copy Disasters 9. Passive Voice Is Not Needed Whatââ¬â¢s passive voice, you ask? (Hint: I included an example in the title of this section.) To identify passive voice in your writing, look for any sentence where the subject is acted upon by the verb. For example, in the statement, ââ¬Å"This article was written by me,â⬠the subject (ââ¬Å"this articleâ⬠) receives the verb ââ¬Å"to write.â⬠You could rewrite this sentence to be in active voice by swapping ââ¬Å"this articleâ⬠with the noun performing the action. Your new, active voice sentence then reads, ââ¬Å"I wrote this article.â⬠You now have a more direct sentence using fewer words! Like magic. Remember, automated grammar-checking software doesnââ¬â¢t always detect these kinds of errors. Youââ¬â¢ll need to scan your writing yourself to find and correct any egregious uses of passive voice. Scan your writing yourself to find and correct any egregious uses of passive voice.10. Check Your Gerunds Make sure you havenââ¬â¢t padded your word count with unnecessary gerund phrases- passive verbs followed by ââ¬Å"-ingâ⬠words. Gerunds often sneak into your writing like this: ââ¬Å"If youââ¬â¢re wanting to try our service . . .â⬠(Rather than, ââ¬Å"If you want to try our serviceâ⬠) ââ¬Å"In this episode, she is asking . . .â⬠(Rather than, ââ¬Å"In this episode, she asksâ⬠) If you find a gerund attached to a passive verb, swap out the phrase for a single active verb. Voila! You just created a stronger sentence. Isnââ¬â¢t editing fun? If you find a gerund attached to a passive verb, swap out the phrase for a single active verb....11. Take Your Time Take your time in all stages of writing, not just the editing stage. Take time to formulate an insanely powerful idea. Take time to flesh out an outline that will keep your piece focused. Take time to write when youââ¬â¢re feeling inspired. And of course, take time to work through edits. Some writers I know spend upwards of six hours writing a 1,500-word blog post. No, theyââ¬â¢re not lazy. Theyââ¬â¢re not newbies. They donââ¬â¢t need an emergency intervention on account of their time management skills. Their writing process takes six hours because it involves thorough research, brainstorming, execution, and editing. They donââ¬â¢t rush any stage of their work, andà neither should you. Need a way to track your time and make the most of it? Try using Toggl: 12. Use a Copyeditor Donââ¬â¢t be afraid to call a professional! Copyeditors are trained to spot errors faster and with greater accuracy than the average content writer. Unlike most grammar-checking software, they apply context to your writing and distinguish between grammatical errors and harmless quirks in your writing voice. If you canââ¬â¢t access a human copywriter, consider a tool like Grammarly. Its grammar robots scan for errors as you type, wherever you type- even inside the bodies of emails. 13. Throw Weak Verbs and Adjectives Out the Window Now that youââ¬â¢ve weeded out the unnecessary gerunds, jargon, and adverbs, turn your focus to those weak verbs and adjectives weighing down your sentences. ââ¬Å"Weakâ⬠verbs, this case, include linking verbs or verbs that describe a state of being. In the sentence ââ¬Å"Marketers seem to want to know if this is true,â⬠the phrase ââ¬Å"seem toâ⬠describes a state of being. ââ¬Å"Marketers want to know if this is trueâ⬠preserves the meaning while removing the weak phrase. ââ¬Å"Marketers want proofâ⬠is even more direct. Weak adjectives often sneak into your writing as redundancies. Phrases like ââ¬Å"exact sameâ⬠and ââ¬Å"current trendâ⬠apply weak adjectives to words that donââ¬â¢t need further clarification. If a noun tells the same story without the attached adjective, leave it on the cutting room floor. Looking for stronger words to mix up your verbiage? Steal some from this list: 14. Nix Non-Essential Words If all these cuts have you in a sweat, donââ¬â¢t panic- youââ¬â¢re almost there! Itââ¬â¢s time to review your writing for remaining non-essential words. These words often lurk in your transitions and use two or three words when one will do. Words like ââ¬Å"that,â⬠ââ¬Å"in order toâ⬠(instead of ââ¬Å"toâ⬠), and ââ¬Å"may possiblyâ⬠(instead of ââ¬Å"mayâ⬠) clog your sentences without adding meaning. Nix ââ¬Ëem! Words like ââ¬Å"that,â⬠ââ¬Å"in order toâ⬠(instead of ââ¬Å"toâ⬠), and ââ¬Å"may possiblyâ⬠(instead of...15. Embrace Your Writerly Tics Yes, you do have to standardize aspects of your writing. Obeying the rules of grammar, structure, and style makes your writing stronger. However, everything else- your voice, your point of view, your process- should come from you. Maybe youââ¬â¢ve got a cheeky sense of humor. Perhaps you like to kick off your content with an anecdote or a provocative claim. Maybe your quirks are more process-oriented- you work from an outline, or you always write your first drafts in a single, frenzied sitting. Embrace these habits! Theyââ¬â¢re what set your content apart. Embrace your quirks! They're what set your content apart.Personal, memorable writing attracts returning readers and builds your following. If readers enjoy and trust your voice, theyââ¬â¢ll choose your content over an anonymous contributor the next time they need an expert opinion. Meeting your word count is only half the battle. Once youââ¬â¢ve got your words on the page, itââ¬â¢s your job to make each of those words count. Your readers donââ¬â¢t have time for fluff- serve them content that is worth their time, even if it means a brutal and bloody editing process before you hit ââ¬Å"Publish.â⬠Take it from a managing editor: These tips will make it all worth it.
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